Uh... what?
You sure this isn't one of those demo pieces that comes w/ garageband? I mean c'mon, this sounds too good for something you're even remotely new to! Well, assuming this original, I will say this: very enjoyable, light, slightly comical even, with some good ol' drama to balance it out. Very good balancing act on the variation of themes and atmospheres. I'm still having a hard time believing this is not a darn demo loop. Wow.
Thanks dude I appreciate the kind words! If it helps explain it at all for you, I'm really familiar with the garageband program, so I know how most of it works, this is just new sounds that I got for it. I really appreciate the review man, I'm definitely gonna love making more songs with these sounds, but I'll stop rambling, thanks dude!
You surprised me there...
I didn't expect anything this good when I found this. While I'm not too awfully fond of the music style, I fell in love with the chords you used. The dist guitar was quite a nice touch as well, eh on the 1:01 to 1:16 (transition could use a bit of work), and it kinda cut off on an awkward ending. If you were interested in putting some real backbone and quality into this song I'd like a PM when you finish.
If you were actually interested in a detailed critique, I would say only a few adjustments and remastering were all that were necessary. Your beat is catchy, your chords are equally catchy, but and you might want to fish around for some higher quality sounds/intruments (keep the guitar with just a few tweaks). One last thing, your crash is a bit loud and awkard too. All in all, I see a great song that has serious potential if you wanted it to reach that level.
That's all of my blabbering. I promise ^.^
I'll send a pm right away
Still catchy. Not much, you? Sounds like trance.
Is good, even better after 1:30. But srsly.. u should use really use this for one of your vids. This would be so sexy in one of the more hardcore parkour vids you have, or hell make a better one wit u and Philip.
Hawt.
You add lyrics to this and you are the best thing since midget porn.
lol Thanks, Yeah this is very very preliminary I have already written out the lyrics, Im just looking for the best way to put lyrics in I'm debating styles.
Wha....what the hell?!?!?
How on earth does this get a 3.97???? Alas, the damn zero bombers. Anywho...
Where can one start with such a song? Your piano captivates and lulls listeners in at the very start, which from then I was caught breathless. Your chord progressions are amazingly smooth. Then when your voice slips in, it adds a very serene element (made me want to fall asleep right away). Your lyrics are a masterpiece, just as calming in and of themselves a captivating element. You have done very well with this song Hania. I am most impressed.
The only thing I would have wished different is that you would have run through the chorus one last time before ending the song, it is too short for how simply enjoyable it is. Ah well. You are incredibly talented. I do hope I find more of your work akin to this.
Good sir, you have been zero-bombed...
This song deserves FAR better than a 3.75 (atm). I agree with F-777. Breath-taking and it certainly has the effect of wrapping one up in a completely different world. Love it!
thanks allot :D and yeah... i was zerobombed as the first thing when this came in... all my music have troped drasticaly in points since all these zero freaks came.. alse my speeded up vertion of this got bombed hardly from the very start.. its sad a few ppl can to that to so many others... thanks for the review :)
Getting better everytime
Ingenious lyrics, amazing chord progression, your song progresses and transitions very smoothly. Very touching. I don't know how, but you really got it this time.
No downsides that I can find. I would like to see the hq version.
Awesome sauce.
Really cool how you fit both dance and ambient into the same song, with ambient being the more slow parts mixed up with the dance arp. Buildups are my favorite part. You don't disappoint in your songs, especially post-buildup. Keep posting more
Truly an audible tranquilizer...
From the perfectly ambient keys to your strong orchestra, sir you have captivated me with your work. Your flow is perfect and everything is so full of emotion. Your acoustics sound so real I'm almost positive you had this recorded somehow. I love it! As much as I wish my opinion were a more educated one, it is not. So I will merely say this is up there with the work of Denny Schneidemesser. I must ask though, is your orchestra recorded by any chance or is that a plugin? If plugin (or heaven forbid, a sample!), what kind?
The strings are utilizing the Vienna Symphonic Library, which is somewhat a step up from EWQLSO (in my opinion) but the other reason why it sounds real is because I use an EWI to input MIDI, which in turn converts the breath I put into it to expression data in the strings.
Also, the use of convolution reverb is a must in orchestra. In this case it's Logic's space designer.
God I remember this game from so long ago!
Besides making another incredible song, techno to say the least, you've made one of my favorite childhood games. I am overly astounded at the coincidence.
Besides all that, I believe you've demonstrated exceptional, not basic, knowledge of MIDI. I do have a question, however: when you input your instruments, do you edit them for time? Do you even record your tracks in real-time? Well that's actually two questions, lol. Just wondering. Anywho, thank you for bringing back one of my childhood memories, as well as a great remix.
most of the tracks are recorded in real time, although crazy synth lines and drum patterns are inputed manually. :)
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